Selasa, 24 Maret 2015
MY DREAM
Hello
friends, my name is Dewi Linda, you can call me linda. I want tell you about my
dream. I have a lot of dreams. When I
was kid, my dream was to be a teacher. It is because when I was in elementary
school my teachers were very kind. But as the time goes by, I have other
dreams. I want be a doctor, but because I entered vocational high school in
accounting department, so I can’t studied sciences more, than I want be a police woman.
However, I
have grown up, now I know what I want. At this moment I study in Semarang state
university in accounting department, after I graduate I want to work as public
civil servant become a professional accountant. I want to work in government
institution.
That is
just beginning of my dreams. After I work for 3 or 4 year, I will have a lot of
money. Then I will start being businesswoman because I have
synchronization between departments I take (Accounting) with business field. I
will buy or build 2 or 3 shops, and make a restaurant. By becoming a public
service servant and an entrepreneur, I hope I will become a figure cheap
giving, rich, easy to be grateful and become a useful person for nation. Amen.
That about my simple dreams guys. :D
Thank you Dewi Linda...hope you can reach your dream. What do you mean by figure cheap giving? :)
BalasHapusI mean " sosok yang murah memberi" miss :)
HapusI see. You can use the word "philanthropist" or "giver".
HapusOk miss, thank you for your suggestion. :)
HapusI hope that your dreams come true Linda, make your parents proud of you. fighting !
BalasHapusThank you for your support Mendi, Let's we make our dreams come true. Fighting ;)
Hapusrespect every dream that you have, because of where will form the spirit to realize your dream come true :-)
BalasHapusFighting Linda :-)
Thank you ratri, we have to always spirit to make our dream come true, fighting Ratri ;)
HapusIt's sound great. Hope your dreams come true Linda. :)
BalasHapusBy the way, why you study in Vocational High School (Accounting) if you want to be a docter before ?
I am sorry, I mean doctor not a docter :)
HapusThank you desi. why I Studied in Vocational High School whereas I want to be a doctor? It Because my parent not alowed me studied in Senior High school, whereas if I want to be a doctor I have to study in Senior high school and continue doctor department in uneversity ;)
HapusLinda, i hope your dream will come true. I think you still can be a doctor although you don't study it now. I mean you can be a good doctor for your family, not by treating they with medicine or working in the hospital, but by taking care of them, of course with your love :-). Everyone can be a doctor by their own way.
BalasHapusYes nurul thank you, you are right that everyone can be a something by their own way ;) fighting
Hapusgo go spirit !
Okay, I see Linda. Never Mind. You choose good choice and obey what your parents wants. Hopefully more baraka :)
BalasHapusI'm sorry Linda, in my opinion you made some mistakes in this writing. You always write "I want be..", you have to use "to" after "want". So, the correct sentence is "I want to be..".
BalasHapusThanks :-)
I'm waiting for your comment in my job as soon as possible :D.
Hi, Linda. I think there are mistakes on your post. You don't use capital letter in "elementary school, vocational high school, and Semarang state university." In my opinion, you should change it like this "Elementary School, Vocational High School, and Semarang State University."
BalasHapusThank you, Linda.
Like Nurul, I also wait for your comment in my post. :D
Desi, I think "elementary school" and "vocational high school" are true because they don't use specific name. It's different with using SD or SMP in Indonesia, in other countries, there are no ES (Elementary School) or VHS (Vocational High School). Forgive me if I wrong :D
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BalasHapusI'm sorry, Nurul. But in my opinion "elementary school and "vocational high school" should use capital letter. Although, "elementary school and "vocational high school" don't use specific name. Thank;s :D
BalasHapusI agree with Desi if "elementary school" should use capital letter. In my opinion the correct is "Elementary School", "Vocational High School", and "Semarang State University".
HapusHi Dewi Linda ..
BalasHapus"can't studied", if you want this word to be a past tense you'd better change into "couldn't study" ....
"I want be a doctor" this is your past dream, so you'd better write it with past tense "I wanted to be a doctor" ...
"call me linda", word "linda" should use capital letter "Linda" :)
Are you sure "I want be a police woman" ? I think "I want to be a police woman" ..
BalasHapus"I will become a figure cheap giving, rich, easy to be grateful and become a useful person for nation" this sentence is not effective because you use the verb "become" two times, you'd better use it one time. Remove "become" in the sentence "... and become a useful person .." :)
"3 or 4 year"
Year is plural, so you have to make it plural by adding -s "years" ..