Kamis, 26 Maret 2015
1.
Like the other children. I want to make my parent proud of me.
One of them is I want to be a
success business woman. . I want to be a business woman because I want to
create my own business that can help the government to decrease the number of
jobless in this country. My dream business are, a coffee shop, that’s because I
really love coffee and I’m sure that most of modern people really love to spend
their time in a comfort place with many kind of activities that they can do,
like do their assignment, and have a quality time with their friends/partner. I
also want to have a boarding house near the university because I think it is
one of the promising trade.
2.
My dream is become a success
business woman. But for the first step, I want to be a public civil servant to
get more experience and then I will use my own salary as my first modal to make
my own business.
Bulan... I hope you can reach your dream :)
BalasHapusYes I agree with you about this sentence "I’m sure that most of modern people really love to spend their time in a comfort place with many kind of activities that they can do, like do their assignment, and have a quality time with their friends/partner." Because I often see that coffee shop crowded by people just for hang out with their friends/partner to fill spare time or do their assignment with free wifi hehe
And then your reason to become a business woman is very noble I hope your dream come true :)
Aamiin thankyou Ratri :D I hope you can reach your dream too :D
Hapusbulan I hope God can hear you
BalasHapusI also agree with your plans, so you must have much money to built some boarding houses near university, because we know that the price of land near university is very expensive hehe
Aamiin thankyou Mendi :D May Allah hear your dream too :D
HapusYes that's right Mendi, the price of land become more expensive everyday hehe
Keep spirit to reach your dreams, Bulan. I believe yo can do it. Don't forget to ask prayer from your beloved parents, :D
BalasHapusThankyou Desi :D Okay I will do it :D
HapusI hope you can reach your dream too
Bulan I think in the line four "My dream business are, a coffee shop," you should use "is" not "are", because you just have one dream in your dream business. And after word are it's no need comma (,)
BalasHapusI think so :)
That is my mistake because actually there are two dreams in my story above, but I wrote it
Hapusseparately hehe.
Thanks for your detail Ratri :D
hello Bulan
BalasHapusthis is a good project. I hope your dream will come true. don't forget to pray and ask for prayers from your parents, Bulan. I agree with your opinion about this "I want to be a public civil servant to get more experience and then I will use my own salary as my first modal to make my own business." Thank you :)
Hello Chintiya :D
HapusAamiin. I hope you can reach your dream too:)
Good dream Bulan.
BalasHapusFighting to make your dream come true.
Thankyou Nurhayati:)
HapusOkay I will do it. Lets fight for our dream :D