Kamis, 26 Maret 2015
MY DREAMS
My name is Aini Asfiani Puteri. I
have a some of dreams. When I was a kind, my dreams was to be a teacher cause
in my mind the teacher is very clever and as the time goes by, I have other
dreams. Sometimes, I want to be air hostess, but I think my weight is not ideal
to be a air hostess. At this time, I almost finish my study in a University.
After I graduate, I want to work in one of the state-owned enterprises such as
director general of tax,audit board of the Republic of Indonesia,and etc. I
want to be the accountan in one of them.
Beside
it, I want to be a business women. When I work for 4 or 5 years, I will have a
lot of money. Then, I will quilt my job and start a business. I want the open
some restourant. Because, I think that if I have some restourant and then the
restourant famous and many people visited in there, I will building of a big
house with gareden, a pool inside many large badrooms. So, my family can live
in there any time. I will also to take my parent to Makkah for “ umrah” or
“haji”. I thinkso that when I get a lot of money I want to give some money to
my parents so my parents is not to hard work again.
I prefer business women cause I think the business women can be
develope our ability, we can be
independent and his time is not dependent
on others
I hope you can reach your dreams Aini
BalasHapusMay I know, what the type of restourant that you want to built ? and where you want to built it ?
I want to open a restaurant cuisines of Java mendi, Insya Allah....:-)
HapusLet's reach our dreams together. Keep fighting! :)
BalasHapusAini, I want to ask you, do you feel that something wrong on your first line in paragraph one? I think word "kind" in this sentence "when I was kind" is something wrong. Maybe you meant is "when I was kid", right?
And then in paragraph two, the word "quilt" and "gareden" maybe typo hehe, right?
Thank you for you're correction Ratri, I will be more careful in the future...:-)
HapusYou're welcome Aini :)
HapusAini, you said "When I was a kind,.......". I think there is mistake. Can you fix it ?
BalasHapusThank you Desi, you're coment its same with Ratri....:-)
HapusHi, Aini. May I give some corrections for your post ? Here the corrections :
BalasHapus1. "I have a some of dreams.." It should change to "I have some dreams." If you use "some" don't use "a".
2. "... clever and as the time goes by,..". After clever you should add point (.) and then remove "and".
3. "..as director general of tax,audit board of the Republic of Indonesia,and etc..." You should change it with " as general director of tax, board audit of Indonesian Republic, and etc."
4. "I want the open some restourant. ." How about make that sentence like this "I want to open some restaurants."
5. ".. many people visited in there, I will building of a big house with gareden, a pool inside many large badrooms." I think you should change that sentence become " many people visit it, then I will build a big house with garden and many large bedrooms, also a pool inside."
That's some corrections from me, Aini. Hope it can help you. :D
Thank you Desi, you're suggestion and correction its true. I will fix it...:-)
Hapushii aini, i hope your dreams come true :-) if you open the restaurant, can you give a special price for me? :D
BalasHapusMay your dreams come true Aini :D Please give me a special price if you already have your own restaurant :D
BalasHapus