Jumat, 20 Maret 2015
Hello Guys….
My name is Desi Septiani,
called Desi. I am college student with a big dream.
Now, I studying in Semarang State University and take accounting for my major.
In this time, I will tell you about my dreams.
I have many aspired dreams. My first aspiration when I was an elementary student become a teacher, because I think it is very fun to always meet children every day.
They are so cute and unadorned. I can teach them many things like lesson, live,
social, culture and many more. We can
study together and meet everyday. I inspired to become a teacher by my teacher
in elementary school. She is very kind people, smart and loving her student
like her child. This profesi is a noble job.
But, when I was in junior high school, I want to be a famous
singer. I like sing so much. So, I join to choir group. I study about tone, how
to read a tone, song rhythm and others with my teacher called Mr. Pranata. He
is very kind and friendly teacher. I get much knowledge for him.
Then, my dreams was changed when I was in vocational high school. I want to be a member of DPR. Why ? Because I want to make this country peaceful and free from corruption. I want to hear voice of Indonesian peoples. But, I think it is just a dream. Become a member of DPR is difficult. I have to have many acquaintances and relations, closer to the peoples of Indonesia. A lot of things to do to become member of DPR. I aware of my ability is not enough to become a member of DPR.
As time
goes by, I realize what my true dream : an accountant in a company or work in
government institute like an auditor or taxation employee. Because what ? My
major in university is accounting. So, if I work in accounting I can apply my
knowledge that I have learned during this time. Work in accounting filled with
the risk of error. So, I have to serious, honest, responsible, and be careful
to minimize the occurrence of errors.
After I
work, I will collect or save my money to built a small business and I hope it
will developed into a large company. I will strive and hard work to reach my
dreams. I want proud my parents and give what they want. All of them, I
dedicated to my parents that I loved so much.
When someone
ask me, what I prefer being a businessman or public servant, I will answer like
this.
I think enough from me, hope my dreams come true. :)For now, I prefer being a public civil servant. Because I want serve the country and looking for work experience. Beside that, utilizing my spare time, I want being businesswoman to increase my income. I will make a small business like catering, online shop, and others. And if my business had become a large business, I want to make a restaurant that serve a traditional food from wonosobo. From that I can introduce traditional food from Wonosobo to the world and I can reduce unemployment in Indonesia by open a business.
Thanks for posting, Desi...
BalasHapus"I am college student with a big dream"...something missing (ada yang kurang)...what do you think?
you're welcome, Miss.
Hapusa after am. So the sentence will become like this " I am a college student with a big dream". That's right, Miss ?
Yes, Desi! :)
HapusDo not forget the article (a or an).
Yes, Miss. I will remember it. Thank you for your correction. :)
HapusI hope your dreams come true Desi
BalasHapusDesi, why do you often changed your dreams ?
What the special food of Wonosobo that you want to serve in your restourant ?
Amiin, thank you Mendi. :D
HapusI often changed my dreams because previous I'm still confused and still unstable. You know at that time, I was child. So, I can't think consistent.
I will serve traditional food from Wonosobo, like Mie Ongklok, Tempe Kemul, Carica or Megono may be. But I will make it different and more interesting to make costumers not bored.
so, have you consistent for now Desi ?
HapusMay I know, what is megono ? can you explain to me? what the diffentiation that you want to make ?
I mean differentiation Desi, sorry for wrong typed
HapusYes, of course. Now, I can consistent about my decision. I have grown up. I realize what my true dreams.
HapusMegono is a traditional food from Wonosobo. It made from rice, vegetable like cabbage, stringbean or long beans, chili, and some seasonigs.If you come to my home in Wonosobo, I will serve it for you. You can get free. Hehee :D
Never mind Mendi. I also ever do that, like you. Hehee
HapusI will make my restaurant concept unique and different from others. Like make new facility (photo corner may be), choose location that have good scenery in Wonosobo, unique food dish (especially Wonosobo traditional foods), unique costume for the waiters, Java architecture style building with ornaments Javanese culture, call the waiter by using a small bamboo gong, and many more. Do you have others idea Mendi ? May be I can use your idea. :D
are you sure Desi ? I very like free foods Desi, hehe thank you for your plan to cook megono for me, I really want to taste megono from wonosobo, emmm I think it very delicious
BalasHapusI think that's enough Desi, the customer will be happy with your concepts, and now by read your plans, I can imagine and I can feel your restourant atmosphere.
very nice :)
Yeah, of course Mendi. It's very delicious. I believe you will like it. So, come on to Wonosobo and taste the megono. hehe :)
BalasHapusI also hope like that. Customers will be happy and satisfied with the served of my restaurant.
Okay, thank you Mendi. :D
okay Desi wait me please :)
BalasHapusAll right, Mendi. I will wait for your coming :)
HapusMay your dreams come true Desi :)
BalasHapusThis is good dreams with nice concept..
Hmm, I like carica Desi, would you tell me how to make carica?
Same with Mendi I want to taste Megono too :D
Amiinn, thank you Winda. :D
HapusOff course, Winda. With pleasure I will tell you how to make it. :D
Emm.. okay. Let's go to Wonosobo. I will give megono to you free. :)
Hi Desi, that is a good job from you. But, I will give you some corrections.
BalasHapusFirst, on your sentence "Now, I studying in Semarang State University..." (on the first paragraph). You should add "am" after "I" because that is present continues tense.
Second, on your sentence "My first aspiration when I was an elementary student become a teacher, because I think it is very fun to always meet children every day" (on the paragraph two). I think you should add "is" after "student", and you have to remove "always" to make your sentence more effective, because you have written "every day" adverb of time.
Third, on your sentence "But, when I was in junior high school, I ..." (on the third paragraph). You should to remove "in".
Fourth, on your sentence "I get much knowledge for him." (on the third paragraph). I think you should to change "for" to "from".
Fifth, " I want to hear voice of Indonesian peoples" (paragraph 4). You should remove "s" from "peoples" because people is plural word.
Sixth, "I will collect or save my money to built a small business...". I think you have to change "built" to" build" because that is infinitive verb, so to + verb 1.
Seventh, "...what I prefer being a businessman or public servant, I will answer...". I think you should change "businessman" to "businesswomen", because you are girl.
Eighth, "..serve a traditional food from wonosobo.". I think you shoul add "s" on "food", because the traditional foods from Wonosobo more than one. And you should change "wonosobo" to "Wonosobo", because Wonosobo is regency.
That is from me Desi. Thank you.
Thank you so much, Mendi. You help me to fix my post become better. :D
BalasHapusI become know what my errors along with improvement.
You're welcome Desi. I am happy if I can help you. :)
BalasHapusDesi, don't ever think that become a member of DPR is difficult. You must be optimism with your dream :D Fightiiinggg!
BalasHapus