Jumat, 20 Maret 2015
My Dreams
My name is
Aliffa Nurul Qomari. I have dreams, moreover a lot of dreams. When I was in
elementary school, I want to be a teacher, policewoman, and many more. Then, when
I was in junior high school I have other dreams that is: businesswoman, I want
to be businesswoman of technology information (IT) because in my opinion IT is
my passion but my parents didn't allow me at the time so I tried to move on; and
then a traveler, I want to be a traveler because I want to visit a lot of place
that I have never seen before even though I can’t speak English fluently but I will
always study hard.
But as the time
goes by, now I know what is actually I want. As you know, I’m studying at a
university with accounting that I took. Actually, I feel too difficult to study
like this. It isn't because I’m lazy, but because of other constraints being
experienced by my parents. However, my parents always give me a motivation to keep
fighting to reach my dream. With this opportunity, I hope I could be
successful. I hope, after I graduate, I could work in one of official service
such as tax office or Bank Indonesia but I’m still going to be a businesswoman.
That is why, if I should answer the second question (what do you prefer, being
a businessman or public civil servant?) actually I don’t want to choose one of them.
Because in a fact, I want both of them. Beside I want to be a public civil
servant, I also want to be a businesswoman. I want to be a public civil servant
because with I could be a public civil servant, alongside I have served for my
country, I would be able to collect money that would be able to my capital to
build my business. With this chance, I hope I could be a useful person to other
people, I also want my parents happy and make them feel proud. I want to take
my parents to Makkah for “umroh” and “hajji”.
And for my last
wish is always to be a successful person in HIS eyes, and I hope Allah always
bless me. I think that is all that I could say about my dreams. In my opinion
it is just a simple dream but I should work hard to reach that dream.
Aliffa fighting !
BalasHapusI hope your dreams come true :) Aaamiiin
Aliffa I want to ask you, why your parents didn't allow you to become business woman of technology information (IT)?
Aaminn.
HapusActually, I don't know why Ratri. But, that was before Ratri, and Insyaalloh I am allowed now. :)
I hope your dreams come true Aliffa
BalasHapusAliffa, why are you really want to be a businesswoman ? have you a figure inspiration about it ? who is he/she ?
aamiin. And I hope your dream also come true Mendi.
HapusBecause I want to participate in build the nation's economy, honestly I am very concerned because Indonesia was always proud of product from abroad, especially in IT, and I would like to Indonesia also has its own IT product.
Yes, I have many Figure Inspiration, such as Bill Gates, Larry Page dan Sergey Brin, and many more, but I am very like with Apple founder, Steve Jobs. How about you Mendi?
I know you are competent enough in IT, my friend. So, if there will be a chance for you to work in that sector, why not? Okay friend, let's reach our big dreams!
BalasHapusThank you Nurul for your comment, but I feel still lacking in the ability of IT, I am still very far from competent, Nurul. But I will always learning and trying to reach my Big Dreams. :)
Hapusaamiin, thank you very much for your prayer to me :). Okay, I hope we can reach Our Big Dreams! aamiin :) :)
May your dreams come true Aliffa :)
BalasHapusYou want to be a businesswoman, right? Would you tell me what is the business want you run? :)
Aamiin, thank you Winda :) May your dream also come true.
HapusI want to be a businesswoman of technology information :). How about you?
Hello Alifa, I hope your dreams come true. If I may know, where you want to work as public civil servant ?
BalasHapusAamiin. I hope your dream come true too.
HapusHai Chintya, I want to work in Bank Indonesia :). And how about you?
hii alifa, keep spirit to reach your dream :-)
BalasHapusokay, thank you Anisa.
HapusHi Aliffa
BalasHapusI would like to correct your mistake, I'm sorry if I wrong... :-)
1. Desi Septiani said to me, that "junior high school" should use capital letter. And then, I think you should use coma (,) after that words.
2. In your sentence "I have other dreams that is;..", I think you should use "are", because it is plural.
Thank you for your comment Siti.
HapusBut, I want to ask you for second correction that you give to me, you're right the sentence that you show me is plural, but is there a formula 'that+are'? so my sentence will be "I have otther dreams, that are..."
Hi Alifa :D I hope you can reach your noble dream.
BalasHapusBtw, in the sentence "I have other dreams that is: businesswoman..." I think the word "dreams" must be "dream" without s because in that sentence you just mention one dream, and you put your other dream in another sentece. That's what I think. Please correct me if I wrong.