Posted by : Unknown Senin, 23 Maret 2015

MY DREAMS

My name is Winda Dwi Astuti. I have a lot of dreams. When I was child, my dream was to be a doctor, because I fell doctor can heal people. But I am afraid with syringe, so I discouraged to be a doctor. I began to think other dreams. I really liked eat, and I thought I want to be a chef. This was my dream when I was Junior High School. Every day I try to cook with simple food, like nasi goreng, bubur jagung, etc. I learnt cooking from my mother, besides from the internet.because I was busy with my school activies, I left my hobies. Along with time I began find my dream that was supported with real proves. When I was Senior High School I had a dream as an economist. So, after I graduated from Senior High School I enrolled to a University called Semarang State University.

I chose Accounting for my study on University. I thought that Accounting could support my dream come true. Here, I learn some courses that related to economic subject, e.g. Accounting, Entrepreneurship, Marketing Management, Micro and Macro Economic, Taxing, etc. I like study economic, because it is very fun. We are learning to analyze various kind of economic problems, such as unemployment, employment, inflation,etc.

After I graduate, I want to be public civil servant. I will work in one of go be public overnment office such as Tax Office, Public Office Accountant, Finance etc. There, I will get good salary. After I work for 4 or 5 years, I will have a lot of money. Then I will start my business. I will buy a shop to run my business. I will have business such as a stall that sells various kind of ice creams, waffles and other variation of dessert.

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Unknown26 Maret 2015 pukul 00.25
Thank you for posting, Winda...

In the sentence of "I like to study economic" , you need to know that the word "economic" is an adjective. I don't think that's what you mean. Any idea of what is its noun?
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Unknown2 April 2015 pukul 12.02
I hope God hear your wishes Winda
I really like ice cream Winda, I hope I can taste your ice cream, and as your friend I want you give me some free ice creams hehehe :D
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Desi Septiani4 April 2015 pukul 02.49
I think not economy, but economics Winda.
I want to ask you, why you afraid with syringe ? Do you have bad experience with it ?
I agree with Mendi, hehe. Because I also really like ice soo much :D
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Desi Septiani4 April 2015 pukul 02.51
I'm sorry, I mean ice cream not ice. :)
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Unknown9 April 2015 pukul 01.16
I hope you can reach your dream :)
Winda I want to ask you, do you have other business be sides a stall which you want to found?
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Desi Septiani17 April 2015 pukul 01.46
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
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Desi Septiani17 April 2015 pukul 01.49
Winda, in my opinion there are mistakes in your post.
1. "I chose Accounting for my study"....... I think choose not chose.
2. "because I was....... " Because is in the early of sentence, so you have to use B (b capital).
3. "I will work in one of go be public overnment office" There is a writing mistake in that sentence. This is repair of that sentence "I will work in one of go public government".
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Desi Septiani18 April 2015 pukul 01.25
4." ....waffles and other variation of dessert." (in the last paragraph), you need to add s on "dessert" because you said variation. It means more than one.
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Unknown22 April 2015 pukul 05.51
Okay Windha, I also agree with Desi's correctons. But I also will give you some additional corrections.
First, On your first paragraph, you said "I left my hobbies", I think "hobby" not "hobbies", because you just explain about one hobby, that is chef.
Second, you said "When I was Senior High School I had a dream as an economist." (On first paragraph), I think you need to add comma (,) after "school" word.
Okay Winda, that is my corrections, thank you.
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