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Posted by : Siti Rokhimah
Selasa, 31 Maret 2015
PRESENT
TENSE
- Unilever is one of the success companies in selling a lot of products until the villages and many people use the products.
- The company must make a plan and good management so that the company can be successful and earning substantial income.S
- ofyan Djalil is coordinating minister for the economy of Indonesia, he come from Aceh, Indonesia.
PRESENT CONTINOUS TENSE
1. Indonesia is increasing the country income from the sector of tourism and sector industry.
2. Poverty and unemployment is becoming problem in Indonesia.
3. Many students doing a demonstration to reject the rise of premium price.
PAST TENSE
1. Sofyan Djalil was inducted by President of Indonesia a few months ago.
2. A few days ago the government raised the price of non-subsidized premium and diesel subsidy of Rp 500 per liter, it resulted in an increase in the price of other goods.
3. President of Nasdaq OMX Adena Friedman visited the Indonesia Stock Exchange on Wednesday ( 03/18/2015 ) . The visit in the framework of talks on trade and technology for surveillance systems .
PAST CONTINOUS TENSE
1. Many people were hoarding premium when the government raised it price.
2. A few months ago Indonesia was raising price of premium when world oil prices were down.
3. I was building a company when I was 25 years old.
PAST PERFECT TENSE
1. Many people had buy premium at a refueling at night before the government raised the price in the morning.
2. Indonesia had had inflation 635% when Soeharto became a President of Indonesia.
3. When Soesilo Bambang Yudhoyono became a President of Indonesia, he had raised the price of premium for four times.
Hi, Siti. I'm sorry, but there are some mistakes in your tenses. First, in your present tense, you wrote "He come from..", remember that He is singular pronoun. Second, "Many students doing a demonstration.." it should be "Many students are doing a demonstration" because the pattern of present continuous tense is Subject + To be (is,are) + Verb ing. And then, in your past perfect tense, you wrote "had buy". That's incorrect because the pattern is Subject + had + V3. Can you fix it? Thanks :-)
BalasHapusThanks for your correction Nurul :-)
BalasHapusYou make me know where is my mistake, I will fix it later. :-) ...
Hi Siti
BalasHapusThis is a good project, but I have correction on your project. In your sentence "Poverty and unemployment is becoming problem in Indonesia." you need replace is with are "Poverty and unemployment are becoming problem in Indonesia." because poverty and unemployment is 2 object, so you must use "are". am I right? :)
Good job,Siti
BalasHapusBut,there are some mistakes in your job.
First, in present tense you wrote "ofyan Djalil is coordinating minister...." remember that in present tense we don't use pattern "to be + Ving". We use "S + V(s/es). You can change with "Ofyan Djalil coordinates minister...". Also, you have to change "ofyan" with "Ofyan" because it is the first word in sentence. Am I right? ;)
Thanks for correction Winda.
BalasHapusFor the word "ofyan", i don't mean it's "ofyan" but "Sofyan", It just wrote mistake.
And then, i don't mean that "coordinating" is Verb, but "coordinating minister" are mean "Menko". I will revise the word replacement and make it more good.