Rabu, 01 April 2015
Steve Paul Jobs, better
known by the name of Steve Jobs. He was born on February 24th 1955 in
San Francisco with his real name Abdul Lateef Jandali. Steve is a son of
Abdulfattah Jandali and Joanne Schieble, from his biological parents, he has a
sister named Mona Simpson, she is a novelist. Then Jobs was adopted by Paul and
Clara Jobs, after being adopted his name was changed to Steve Paul Jobs.
Start in 1968, when he
was 13 years old, Steve got his first job at factory of handphone. In 1974,
Steve Jobs made the Atari video game, two years later he showed the beginning
of Apple is the first board in the Homebrew Computer Club. When he was 21 years
old, he built it into Apple Computer Inc., which he founded with Steve Wozniak
and Ron Wayne. That year also they founded Apple 1. And at the beginning of the
80s Steve encourage the creation of Mancintosh.
Toward the end of 1984,
there is a decrease sales in all industry. After that the end of May
1985, Steve Jobs as head of the Macintosh division was issued by Sculley, an
CEO of Apple. After issued from Apple, Steve built NeXT, a development company
of computer platform that involved in market of high education and business. In
1986, Steve took over the computer graphics division of Lucasfilm Ltd which
later changed it to Pixar who then bought finally gave rise Walt Disney
Company. At the end of 1996, Apple was bought the NeXT. Because of that
purchase, Steve could come back to be an Apple's CEO until 2011. And on August
24th 2011, Steve decided to resign as CEO of Pixar Animation
Studios.
On October 5th 2011,
Steve Jobs passed away in California at the age 56 years old after seven years
diagnosed with pancreas cancer. Steve Jobs widely known as a visionary, pioneer
and genius in business, innovation, and design product, and a man who changed
the face of the modern world, revolutionized six different industry, and an
example for all of chief executive. And his death widely responded and
considered as a big loss to the world by his fans around the world.
Steve Jobs is most
admired businessman among the teenagers in survey by Junior Achievement (August
2009). Steve also got ranked 57th in the world’s most powerful
people. Moreover, he also known as most powerful business leader and was
awarded the National Medal of Technology by President Ronald Reagan in 1984.
Work hard and never give
up to reach our future goals are things that we must emulate. His persistence
built a company that started from zero up to be a great company that is known
by all the world.
The reality of the Steve
Jobs’s life certainly inspiring us to more work hard to be able to reach what we
want.
Good job guys. But I will give you some corrections.
BalasHapusFirst, "...Steve Jobs made the Atari video game...". I think more effective if you erase "the".
Second, "...an CEO of Apple.". I think you have to change "an" to "a", because after those word is CEO.
Third, "Steve Jobs widely known as a visionary, pioneer and genius in business, innovation, and design product, and a man who changed the face of the modern world, revolutionized six different industry, and an example for all of chief executive.". I think you have to change those sentence to " Steve Jobs widely known as a visionary, pioneer and genius in business, innovation, and design product. He also a man who changed the face of the modern world, revolutionized six different industry, and an example for all of chief executive." are you agree? hehe.
Fourth, "Steve Jobs is most admired businessman among the teenagers in survey by Junior Achievement (August 2009).". In my opinion, you must add "the" before "most".
Fifth, "Steve also got ranked 57th in....". I think you have to erase "ed" on the "ranked" word, because before it, "got" is verb 2.
Sixth, "Moreover, he also known as most powerful ,,,". You must add "the" before "most".
That's all for me guys, thanks. :)
Thank you Mendi,
HapusYour corrections are helpful for us. :)